When the narrator came to Paris and found Mr. Strickland in a poor hotel. Having had a conversation with him, the story-teller understood that Charles Strickland would never return to his family and his ordinary life not because of the other woman but because of his passion to art. He was going to be an artist. When the narrator came back to London and told Mrs. Strickland about his trip, at first she couldn't belive in it. But then she put up with that, and began to work as a typist.
Four years had past. The narrator decided to leave London for Paris, and he visited Mrs. Strickland to say goodbye. There he found out that she had a prosperous printing office.
In Paris he met his old friend Dirk Stroeve. As it turned out, Stroeve had already acquainted with Mrs. Strickland and was fond of his paintings. Soon Dirk Stroeve arranged a meeting for the narrator and Charles Strickland.
Four years had past. The narrator decided to leave London for Paris, and he visited Mrs. Strickland to say goodbye. There he found out that she had a prosperous printing office.
In Paris he met his old friend Dirk Stroeve. As it turned out, Stroeve had already acquainted with Mrs. Strickland and was fond of his paintings. Soon Dirk Stroeve arranged a meeting for the narrator and Charles Strickland.
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ОтветитьУдалитьWhen the narrator came to Paris, HE (instead of when)found Mr. Strickland in a poor hotel - logically incorrect structure of the sentence
"having had" is actually a modifier phrase and not used often on the GMAT. try to use have had
BUT - can't be used at the beginning of the sentence